Wednesday, 5 December 2012

Draft Script


The Day That Changed My Life: Daddy Boxer
By Sam Ellis and Ashley Kay            
            
Picture
Commentary / Sound

SEQ.
WS of Craig’s house
MS of front door opening and Craig leaving
Static WS of Craig jogging down the street
Tracking CU of Craig’s feet running
Tracking CU of Craig’s arms as he is running
Tracking CU of Craig’s eyes as he runs
WS of the gym
MS behind Craig as he enters gym


COM
“Craig is a twenty-one year old professional boxer from Dagenham who looks to have a successful career ahead of him in the ring. However, Craig’s journey was not an easy one, as he faced his biggest challenge yet.”

Title Sequence “The Day That Changed My Life”


Title Sequence

SEQ.
CU of punch bag being hit
CU of Craig’s face
MS of Craig skipping
CU behind speed ball (Craig’s face in background)
WS of empty gym with Craig in the ring with trainer.

Act Int. - GYM
MS of Craig in the ring answering questions as he trains

CA.
CU on punch bags, equipment, drink bottle, gloves, Reaction shot of trainer.






Natural sounds from the gym

“I’m Craig, I’ve been boxing since 2003. I currently box for TKO in Canning Town. I train a few times a week, on most of my days off work.”

“I started boxing because…”


House Int. - Craig
WS on sofa/interview area during interview
MS on Craig
CU on Craig


Bedroom Int.
Actuality shots of Craig showing us his boxing memorabilia, photos, equipment etc.


“I like boxing because…”






“Ive kept all of my old boxing gear, gloves, wraps, pads, shorts. Ive got all my old trophies, ive got signed photos, signed gloves. Ive met loads of boxers, and I get to train with pros at TKO.”


House Int. - Craig
WS on sofa/interview area during interview
MS on Craig
CU on Craig

CA.
CU on family photos

“I quit boxing for a few years because…
…I was in a relationship and couldn’t fit it in around work and social time…
…When we split up I began training again to stay fit…”

“A few months after we split up I got a phone call from her, in which she told me that she was pregnant and the baby is mine.”

“When I found out I felt…”


House Int. - Parents
WS on sofa/interview area during interview
TW on both
CU on Mum
CU on Dad
MS switching between the two

CA.
CU on photos of Craig and Taylor, Baby photos of Taylor, Taylors toys


“How we felt when Craig told us he was going to be a Dad…”

“Craig having Taylor has impacted our lives because…”

“Craig has grown up, he’s more mature and…”

House Int. - Craig
WS on sofa/interview area during interview
MS on Craig
CU on Craig

CA. Taylor playing, Actuality shots in the garden, the two together etc.

“I like being a dad because…”

“Having Taylor has meant that ive had to grow up, I cant always go out with the boys of a weekend… I have to be careful and think of Taylor first.”


Act Int. – Taylors Birthday
WS of the room
MS of Craig holding Taylor
CU of family members talking
WS of Garden
MS of Taylor playing
MS of Cake

Int. with Craig

COM
“Today is Taylors Birthday. Craig’s family have come over to celebrate.”

(INTERVIEWS WITH VARIOUS FAMILY MEMBERS)

“Taylor has changed my life for the better, he made me want to start boxing again and be the best that I can be. I’m proud to be his dad.”


Act Int. – GYM

CU on gloves boxing
MS on Craig
WS on ring

Shot of Taylor wearing gloves in the ring?


“I’m now Pro! I started boxing again a few years ago, after Taylor was born. I want to do my best not only for me but for him, I want to do him proud.”


SEQ.
MS of Craig leaving the ring
CU on Craig putting gloves in bag
MS on Craig leaving the room
CU on light switch turning off
WS on Ring as the lights go off



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